Hello? This song is the last song I made in the military in 1988.
I was a little lost in my thoughts about the future during the short few months before I was discharged from the military, but I still wanted my life to end as soon as possible. I made the melody that came out of my mouth while I was on guard duty.
Any help with the music, whether it be comments, singing, arranging, etc. is greatly appreciated.
Thank you so much for your advice on the pronunciation and grammar of English song words Please understand that English is not my first language, so my pronunciation and grammar are very wrong I can't sing, so I use Syndysize V, but there's only one Korean voice I can't use it because it sounds awkward in Korean I hope that the English lyrics can convey the overall feeling well I will try to make a song that I sang in Korean one day
Original Release : 1988 Copyright : aSoM all rights reserved 2025 E-Mail : asom2me@naver.com & asom2me@gmail.com _________________________________________________________________________ 1. Lyrics : aSoM 2. Compose : aSoM 3. Arrange : aSoM 4. English Subtitles : Falconzero 5. Genre : Pop 6. Instruments : Band in a Box 7. Sing a Song : Synthesizer V Pro 8. Mixing : Cubase Pro 11, MixPad
Not a bad song, could have a bit more variety (different drums, an extra instrument here or there) between the verses and the chorus to make it more interesting. As for writing in another language, I always check here that what I write is really what I mean Not perfect, but helps a lot. Also, if you add the lyrics to your forum post, other forum members will be able to spot problems more easily.
And last but not least, if you want more feedback on your songs, it helps to comment on other members' songs. That's what the forum is for.
I think it's a sweet song, Asom, and I like the chorus, but I think there should have been more verses and a chorus after the musical break.
I agree with B.D. "… if you want more feedback on your songs, it helps to comment on other members' songs. That's what the forum is for."
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Yes, I really appreciate your advice. I listen to your posts occasionally and want to express my feelings, but English is not my native language, so I am very careful about leaving comments for fear of making mistakes or expressing things differently from my thoughts (in a bad way). I will try harder in the future.
.................................... I listen to your posts occasionally and want to express my feelings, but English is not my native language, so I am very careful about leaving comments for fear of making mistakes or expressing things differently from my thoughts (in a bad way). I will try harder in the future.
This is a real catchy song Super synth voice and mix. A suggestion - just type you comments in your native language and using google translate translate it to English and post both versions.
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If you're working on a new song, you can always send me a text on this forum, and I'll be glad to check out your lyrics and vocals to make sure there are no English mistakes.
Even though SynthesizerV only has one native Korean voice, all the voices can sing in Korean, even if they aren't native Korean.
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