Hi Izzy! Even without listening, you deserve points for the artistic thread title!

A magnificent song - I love a good 3/4 song, and this delivered. Lots of texture changes underpinned by a consistent yet varied melody, and slowly building, building, a false ending and a rock guitar outro. Brilliant! Your piano friend added good parts as well - they iz a really seriass player.

The theatrical nature of the song and your great vocal was in the same vein as a song by the late Chris Cornell ex Soundgarden) ‘Nearly forgot my broken heart’. That’s meant to be a compliment.

Okay - you say you might do some tinkering, but it’s excellent - almost in sight of the finishing line I reckon.

Andrew


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