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Wow! First that intro was so moving. Second, you played so well with dynamics here. The swelling, the instrumental choices, the pause...really nice. Peter Gabriel like in parts. The only thing I wasn't crazy about was the harshness in some of the harmonies due to their electronic nature, but needs must. Awesome piece!
As for getting over one's self and finding some zen, pretty sure all the ego can ever do is "work on it".
As for the hobby, stick to it. You've got talent. Thanks for sharing it here. Beth, Wow, thank you so much for such an incredibly thoughtful and detailed comment! It truely means the world to me to hear your reactions to the track. I'm genuinely thrilled that the intro resonated with you so deeply and that the dynamics, swelling, and instrumental choices hit the mark. Hearing that it brings to mind Peter Gabriel is high praise indeed – that's a connection I'd never consciously aimed for, but I'm absolutely delighted if it evoked that feeling! I also truely appreciate your honest feedback about the electronic harmonies. You hit the nail on the head with "needs must" – sometimes the tools dictate a bit of the texture, so it's good to know where those elements might be perceived differently. It's valuable insight. And your insight on the ego and "working on it" for zen is remarkably astute and something I've been wrestling with myself. It's comforting to know that thought resonated, and your perspective offers a quiet, profound validation there. Finally, your encouragement to "stick to it" and acknowledging the talent means the world. It's comments like yours that fuel the passion and make sharing this creative outlet so rewarding. Thank you again, Beth, for taking the time to listen so deeply and for sharing such a kind and insightful response. Warmly, Izzy
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Just seeing the title displayed as you do, Izzy, makes it obvious that this guy is different and very creative. And the demonstration of creativity is exponentially increased the more we delve. DANG! That piano break is outstanding. I love the whole dynamic prodcution, Izzy. Brilliant vocal and harmony. What a wonderrfully creative song. You call the song a work in progress (or were you refering to youself?), but, man, I can't think of how you can improve it. Marty Thank you, I'm humbled by your incredible and detailed review. It means the world to hear such a comprehensive and enthusiastic response. Your comments on the creativity and the dynamic production are incredibly validating. Your words honestly fill me with so much motivation. Thanks again for taking the time to listen so deeply. my best to you always. Izzy
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.................................. All input is welcome, even the kind that starts with, "Have you considered a different hobby?" 😵 DON'T EVEN THINK ABOUT CHANGING HOBBIES! Yes I had to shout that! This is brilliant. Loved the piano and vocal A brilliant arrangement An outstanding mix DON'T CHANGE A THING - Yes I'm yelling again LOVED IT Magnanimous, All-powerful, Reputable, Intelligent, Out of this world I don't know if you are the undisputed King of OTT or the King of good vibes! But I do know that you are a Showcase treasure my friend. My thanks yet again Izzy.
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No spiritual cleansing necessary, I think it's a pretty good and interesting song. The piano interlude alone makes it worth listening to already. Interesting, almost theatrical dynamic changes. I love it ![[Linked Image - Only viewable when logged in]](https://www.pgmusic.com/forums/images/icons/default/thumbs_up.gif) Thank you so much, B D! Your review truely made my day. I do enjoy and admire your very creative work so it's incredibly rewarding to hear that the song resonated with you. And I'm also so pleased you appreciated the dynamic changes and how you described them as 'theatrical' – that's a wonderful compliment. Thanks again for listening and for such thoughtful words! regards Izzy
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Hey Izzy,
This is incredible man I really love this.
It sounds a whole lot like Peter Gabriel, who is one of my favorites.
If I had only started listening at the song say at the halfway mark or three quarters the way through I could have sworn I was listening to a Peter Gabriel song, your voice sounded that close, something like Red Rain.
Like I said before man if getting all depressed and Moody makes you write great songs like this then I think you ought to stay in the bath like Robert Smith being depressed forever!!
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This is awesome man. David It's getting late and I'm all tuckered out so I'm just going to tell it straight man.... You are the artist that I enjoy the most on this forum. Your willingness and courage to stretch the boundaries is awesome and incredibly inspiring and you often come up with amazing music that gives the great unwashed (me) permission to go beyond! I'm honoured when you comment on my songs Best Izzy.
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LOVE the album cover. Kudos.
Oh yeah, definitely, A Fan.
Songwriter, Singer, Producer, Artist.
WOW.
fj Floyd Thankyou Your words are my oxygen respect Izzy.
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Hi, Izzy. Love the intro. It's got a great sense of space, and sounds awesome on my speakers. In comparison, the vocal doesn't have the same sense of space, so it sounds... flat. Which is ironic, because I really like what you did with the vocal. But I would have liked it if you've figured out how to keep that depth without drowning it in reverb. Cool sound. As others said, very theatrical. Putting a string trio instead of "big" strings at 2:20 would have been my preference. I'm not sure you need the high string part at 2:50. Sticking with vocals only, but adding some effects on the vocals instead might be interesting. Anyway, very cool song here.  Mr David I really appreciate your in depth review, I can barely keep my eyes open now so could you please take a raincheck untill tomorrow?
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Hello Izzy,
I've been away much of the past 2 months since my wife passed away - but starting to get back into it.
This is an incredibly powerful track with so much to like about it. The only thing I think might have helped would be a small bit of vocal reverb - just enough to know it's there. I would call it Rock Opera. Such a full production with so many variations that mutually benefit one another.
I absolutely loved the guitar as the song wound down to the end. The piano was very nicely done.
A fantastic listen to a fantastic song. Totally loved it.
Alan
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Lot of good lines here indeed.
We much liked:
“The air is thick with all that’s unsaid.
A symphony of silence plays instead”
One look at the waveform told the mix story.
The story of an open mix with nice dynamics.
The intro piano and all that follows are very effective.
Simply stated … a very engaging arrangement.
Your vocals and your friend’s keys are standout.
I wouldn’t second guess it at all.
Well done!
J&B
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