Originally Posted by BYOBand
Wow! First that intro was so moving. Second, you played so well with dynamics here. The swelling, the instrumental choices, the pause...really nice. Peter Gabriel like in parts. The only thing I wasn't crazy about was the harshness in some of the harmonies due to their electronic nature, but needs must. Awesome piece!

As for getting over one's self and finding some zen, pretty sure all the ego can ever do is "work on it".

As for the hobby, stick to it. You've got talent. Thanks for sharing it here.

Beth,

Wow, thank you so much for such an incredibly thoughtful and detailed comment! It truely means the world to me to hear your reactions to the track.

I'm genuinely thrilled that the intro resonated with you so deeply and that the dynamics, swelling, and instrumental choices hit the mark. Hearing that it brings to mind Peter Gabriel is high praise indeed – that's a connection I'd never consciously aimed for, but I'm absolutely delighted if it evoked that feeling!

I also truely appreciate your honest feedback about the electronic harmonies. You hit the nail on the head with "needs must" – sometimes the tools dictate a bit of the texture, so it's good to know where those elements might be perceived differently. It's valuable insight.

And your insight on the ego and "working on it" for zen is remarkably astute and something I've been wrestling with myself. It's comforting to know that thought resonated, and your perspective offers a quiet, profound validation there.

Finally, your encouragement to "stick to it" and acknowledging the talent means the world. It's comments like yours that fuel the passion and make sharing this creative outlet so rewarding.

Thank you again, Beth, for taking the time to listen so deeply and for sharing such a kind and insightful response.

Warmly,

Izzy