Originally Posted by Tano Music
Excellent track. I loved how you used all the BIAB components, and I thought you did a really good job in delivering the overall message. In fact, I thought, in the very first chords, I heard an up-and-down sound movement. My only suggestion is. I thought the ending was abrupt.
Otherwise completely enjoyed it
Thanks Tom - that up and down movement was accidental - or subconscious.
I think you’re right about the ending - it maybe needed another bar or two. It’s somewhat softened by the fade out on the rhythm guitars.
Thanks again for your discerning ear!
Andrew


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Andrew D
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