Hi, Beth.

Originally Posted by BYOBand
True and cruel. Good match. Your chorus lyrics are quite powerful. Having just watched Daisy Jones and the Six on Netflix, this song sounds like it could have been one of theirs. I like the band...the fiddle sounds great.
Thanks! smile

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That note on cruel hurt though. Was that the point?
There were a number of points where I could choose between the melody being smooth, or being interesting. You can guess which I chose. laugh

I think the vocal effort and skip add to the dissonance, but it works for my ear, so I left it in.

Thanks for listening and commenting!


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Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?