Hi Asom!
I agree with Tom and Chay - your original Korean version sounds much more natural in terms of singing, and hearing your voice elevates this song well above the standard of your other songs. I am a firm believer in songwriters using their own voice, no matter how flawed they think it might be, or how bashful they are. I think your singing voice is fine - probably preferring it mixed central rather than to the left - but very authentic nonetheless.
Love the sax throughout the song.
Andrew
PS It’s good to see you contributing to comments in other threads - you have a rich songwriting history and would have a lot of insights I would think.

Last edited by Andrew Dee; Yesterday at 03:10 PM.

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