Hi Arri - I like this new style you’ve applied - the rhythm section keeps the song moving along nicely.

Regarding the ending, I can hear the last two bars sounding like a tag, so maybe that could be repeated with band only (and maybe slowing down?), and finish on a held chord - ‘G…’ in BIAB terms?
Andrew


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Andrew D
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