Hi Lee - welcome to the forum! There are many members here who are very encouraging and supportive, and will also lend you their discerning ears.

I think you’ve made good use of texture (if that’s the right word) - differences in dynamics between the verses, bridge and chorus. I love your use of the vocal aahs in the chorus, and that outro lead guitar choice fits nicely.

Being another Aussie, you’ll have to get used to many members posting overnight while you sleep, but also many from Europe and elsewhere, including a contingent of Aussies and kiwis.

Looking forward to seeing more of your song posts in future.

Andrew