Beth - where did you find those rhythm guitar RealTracks - they are wonderful, and you've used them well. I almost felt a reggae swoon moment coming over me - almost. Also, that lead guitar choice and your mix of it at end/beginning of each verse glues them together well IMHO.

The lyrics remind me of something I heard someone say once - which I think is so relevant to so many viewpoints - you can't impose your truth on anyone - and so much of that has been done in the name of [ideology].

I didn't hear your sing asterisks, so I'm going back to listen to that section a few more times - just so you know in case the analytics are spiking in a specific section. smile

The only suggestion I could make if you're looking for one is maybe some kind of lead into the bridge to let us know something is about to change - but not sure what. This isn't a biggy.

Andrew