Hi Pete, A song I can really relate.
You have a great start on this one. I know that it will sound better with your vocal. I had the same thoughts as Chay. That is there is to much going on in the background. IMHO it is distracting the vocal.

I will be waiting for the finished song.


Principal: Your child always causes trouble in school.
Me: My child causes trouble at home, do I ever call you?

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