Hi there. Took some of your thoughts onboard and doubled the vocals, moved them a hair up the timeline, and added two little bits of harmony. I also pumped the solo guitar which resulted in a more obvious abruptness I don't know how to deal with. Can anyone share their start and stop techniques...besides fading in and out which doesn't always work either? I await your wisdom!

https://soundcloud.com/thetiltedhalolab/rocks-of-ideology