I agree with my forum friends re the lead guitar—too sharp-edged and kind of a distraction. If it were my project, I’d cut the solo, have about 8 bars of backing with gentle vocal ooo’s in harmony—creates kind of a reflective interlude where the listener can take in your message. Also, I don’t like the word “sh*t” in the lyric—comes off as too much “in your face” and isn’t natural compared to the rest of the lyric. However, I really like the other aspects of your project, and I’m glad I stopped in to listen.


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