Deej,

This is such an impressive sound and impressive song. You and Ray have truly reached an awesome level of professional excellence. I love everything about this. Your vocals are a standout and your performance is sublime. What really captured my imagination was the way the AABBBA rhyme scheme worked in the lyrics for the verses. I've never encountered this rhyme pattern before and I'm thoroughly impressed. Using a third, displaced A-rhyme with a shorter poetic meter at the end of each verse was a magnificent way to lead into be resolved by the chorus. It's definitely something that I'll be testing in the future!

I thoroughly (and enviously) enjoyed where you and Ray took me.

This was a musical journey and a half.
--Noel


MY SONGS...
Audiophile BIAB 2025