That was an interesting way to write. My mom would have really enjoyed that song because it was a style she grew up listening to as a young person.

I can appreciate the work you put into it even though it's not my cuppa java.


You can find my music at:
www.herbhartley.com
Add nothing that adds nothing to the music.
You can make excuses or you can make progress but not both.

The magic you are looking for is in the work you are avoiding.