Hi aSoM.

Pleasant song and melody. The backing and vocals work well.

There are a number of places where there are issues with words:

"When this night goes...", there's something wrong with how "goes" is being sung.
"Like a kid with vague expectations..." the word "vague" is pronounced wrong, and "expectations" is missing.
"Despite flying through..." the word "through" is pronounced wrong.
"I might never..." the word "never" is pronounced wrong.

Most of the errors are probably typos when you typed the words into SynthV. It's a really easy mistake to make.

With "never", it sounds like you put "ne" on one note, and "ver" on another note. When you do that, SynthV thinks these are two different words (but they aren't) and guesses how to pronounce them. Sometimes it guesses right, but this time, it guessed wrong.

Nice song! smile


-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?