I really like this! The vox were very good. The arrangement was good. Love that guitar solo! In verse 3, that word design just doesn't flow for me. If possible, I would encourage you to redo that verse with an ear toward improving the prosody. Other than that, a fine effort!

Last edited by TuneMonger; 08/21/25 08:59 PM.

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