Deej,

No apology necessary. We all come to the forum as time, opportunity, music production allow. Life, too, has its say. So, post and comment as all those things allow.

I think it's a great song as is. there's nothing to apologize for here. It sounds terrific in all respects. Everything works and works together quite nicely. The lyric is particularly good, as is your vocal. I wouldn't change anything about it. Also, I liked the unexpected chords in the chorus. Nice!

I didn't reflect much on my retirement. I had decided when I was about 50 that I would retire when I turned 60. Three weeks after I turned 60, I retired. That was almost 20 years ago. Haven't regretted a day of it.

Good song, good listen!

Alan


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