Funny & cool too.
I assume, using Kneewobbler, very Carry On, as you forum tag, that there was a sense of humour lurking.
Your voice is good...need a little evening of level and seemed to have a little too much bass, (proximity effect?), & some sibilant stuff too...though the bass bits were off to the side so may be reverb or something else causing those things.
I think the vocal & melody would have been even more at home with a Mersey Beat backing.


Cheers
rayc
"What's so funny about peace, love & understanding?" - N.Lowe