Hi David,

I love the mandola, the progression of the chorus and especially the lyrics of it with the nursery rhyme bits. Really suits. You seem to have showed more restraint with the vocals than in your last couple of tunes and its all easier for this ear to follow. I think your daughter made a good call too. I get it that it's a work in progress, how fed up with a song one can get, and that urge just wanting to get it out there. It's actually really helpful to hear songs in various different stages and also really interesting to read about your whole thought process, so thanks for including that bit too.