Hi, Beth.

Originally Posted by BYOBand
I love the mandola, the progression of the chorus and especially the lyrics of it with the nursery rhyme bits. Really suits.
I'm glad to hear it! smile

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You seem to have showed more restraint with the vocals than in your last couple of tunes and its all easier for this ear to follow. I think your daughter made a good call too.
Point taken!

It's fun to have a big, bombastic song, so I went a bit (or maybe way) overboard the last time. I'll try to keep my exuberant tendencies reined in. wink

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I get it that it's a work in progress, how fed up with a song one can get, and that urge just wanting to get it out there. It's actually really helpful to hear songs in various different stages and also really interesting to read about your whole thought process, so thanks for including that bit too.
You're welcome. I think frustration is a normal part of any creative process, because we're being forced to go outside our normal thought process. Songwriting is an interesting combination - a bit of storytelling, a bit of puzzle solving, and often just hard work.

Thanks for listening and commenting!

-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?