Originally Posted by Knee Wobbler
Hey Janne,

Great subject matter for this song and well thought through lyrically and musically. The production was excellent. I was reminded during the chorus of David Bowies Blackstar album, just a few similarities there. The chord variations in the verses took me by surprise and they worked well. My only criticism, and it’s something I need to watch myself, during the verses there were a couple of times the music was louder than the vocal, so I couldn’t understand what was sung. But great song, well done.

Kind regards.

Thanks KW for your detailed and postive review of my song smile Great to hear that you found Bowiesque in my music, I just listened the Blackstar album, didn't notice direct similarities, but I really appreciate your reference. Thanks for pointing out the vocal mixing, I used unmasking to lower the levels of the piano parts that were clashing with the vocals, but it seems that not enough.

Janne


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