One more thing and this is to the author. You did well with this song because it's provokes thought. It provokes opinion and feeling. In the end, all any writer wants is to accomplish that. For that, you should be proud. It's a heck of a lot more interesting than the multitudes [myself included] of songs centered around love found, had, and/or lost. It's also more challenging too. Good for you! However misguided....!

Dan

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