Originally Posted by floyd jane
ray,
Sounds Fantastic in phones.
Sweet Bass.
Good drum sound (could be louder smile )
Everything else is blended perfectly into cohesive-single-sound-unit.
Solo sounds terrific. Nice choice of lines.
Some of the opening piano notes have a short duration that sounds "forced" (lacking "flow"), unnatural.
Love your vocal on this. Keep doing this.
Excellent mix.
A very enjoyable listen.
fj
Thanks FJ,
Whilst I didn't mix this in headphones I did use them often to ensure it translated well in them.
The opening piano notes were doctored. I had a nice, flowing bed that juxtaposed with the narrative but decided that was too PF so opted to edit in some slight adjustments that nudged that flow a little of kilter, in a way that would worry the close listener...a bit of foreshadowing so to speak.


Cheers
rayc
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