Hi Bob,

What a sad story, but you sang it impressively.
The background vocals weren't bad at all. Well, maybe the first time (a little bit), but I liked them.
Your voice is so low here, the background vocals "brightened" it up a bit...

And since you mentioned the word "Orphanage," I saw that the lyrics didn't need to rhyme, so that's solved then. I see Marty said the same thing.
"Orphanage" was also a possibility, but it has the same length, so no worries, as long as your tongue can handle it...

Hans


Hans Berkhout
(Birchwood)
https://soundcloud.com/user-296497130