Originally Posted by Noel96
This is very, very well done. You have really excelled with this song. Your creation is amazing and your use of Synth V is fantastic. To me, your chorus is a standout.

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Listen to the silence
through all the noise around
hear when a crowd makes no sound.
Listen to the silence
not the man-made machine
but the holy evergreen.

I found myself pondering that last line over and over. The way that you have set up the word "silence" to be called "the holy evergreen" is very clever writing. I have never used this technique but I am great admirer of it now that I've seen it. If ever you see something similar in my lyrics some time in the future (assuming I'll post more songs), you will know that the technique came from you smile

All the best,
--Noel

Thanks Noel for your pleasant comment, I really appreciate your positivity in your words here and in your music. Glad you liked "the holy evergreen" idea, I don't know whether it is clever, I just wanted to express a "hit record" that has existed long before humankind.

Janne

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