Originally Posted by B.D.Thomas
I like this version much better than the earlier ones.
I think the more classical instrumentation suits the song better.
I would even remove the organ on the left and replace it with something more traditional (I know you love that organ sound, but still), for example with sustained strings or something like that.

Thanks, B.D.! To get a deeper background sound I've recently used multiple different warm pad & strings, synth pads, etc, on 2 new instrumentals and they've worked really well, so I think you're right that at least 1 or maybe 2 sets of synth pads & strings may have worked better than the organ, but this project's now over for me as it began in the early summer of 23 with a brilliant trained English vocalist, but she only recorded half of the lyrics before her husband - who'd actually suggested her - stopped the project.

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