Originally Posted by Tano Music
Wonderful work, and a message so needed right now. I can't identify a single element of this that wasn't completely outstanding. It's often the case that "message" lyrics, like this one, include some awkward or forced words/rhymes in order to state the message, but this was very clean, so singable, and professional. Great work!

Thanks. I agree. Forced or lazy rhymes aren't going to cut it. You just have to work with the lyrics, rewriting as needed.


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