Originally Posted by TuneMonger
Great song, lyrics and vocals. My favorite line was "our now will never be our then." You keep em coming, but they're all keepers!
Thanks, Bob. Yep, learn from the then and the when will be better.

Originally Posted by firesong
Marty...great "make up" song...love the style of this one and really nice BIAB solo...fit the style perfectly...great vocal and your production and mix are crazy good...well, well done!
Thank you, Dan. This couple didn't just do the typical "make up" for just a selfish night. They did it for each other.

Originally Posted by Janice & Bud
Janice said “yea!” for the happy ending. 😊

We enjoyed the story and your vocal was so good.
Your expression following the line of “she’s back dressed in lace” was
priceless.

Your bass is always top bar and the band was hittin’ the note.
As Ray said, “You managed to lay down an excellent bass track while staying out of the baritone's way.
Not an easy task.”

And that hazy ballad solo RT did a fine job.

As always your vid well complemented the narrative.

Enjoyed it!

J&B
Ha,I'm with ya on the "let's make this a happy ending" ingredient, Janice. Bud, when laying down the bass, I listen to a baritone-heavy mix. Later I would solo the baritone and bass tracks just to be sure. [if there's ever a clash, he goes wink ] Thanks for the vid nod, too.

Originally Posted by PROJECT M
Hi Marty,
Haven't written a review for you in a long time...
Very cool song.
The intro sounds really good.
You've put together a great band.
Your vocals sound just right.
Nice bass work.
The guitar solo fits well.
Great work, my friend.
Andi ;-)
Thank you very much, Andi. Can't wait for your next project-- mmmmm.

Originally Posted by animarorecords
Marty,

The baritone guitar is very effective.
It was used a lot in the '60s, but it feels fresh to hear it again now.
There are a lot of songs about couples getting back together, your song is one of the best and the lyrics are very moving.
Your vocals support it beautifully.
Enjoyed my listen and watch a lot.

Best regards.

Shigeki Adachi
Thanks, Shigeki. I couldn't afford a baritone guitar in the 60s, so... haha Thanks for the kind words about the vocal. Since I suck at playing bass and singing, I never sang until making demos. Now I learned enough to practice, practice, practice.

Enjoy whatever happens!
marty

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