First of all: I LOVE the lyrics and how you play with words, even if I don't get everything (at least I think so).
Cool (and all too true) social critics packed in a (kinda) punk-ish song.
Good use of breaks, but there could be a little more dynamic difference between the verses and the choruses.
I'd also consider adding a little more treble to your vocals to make them cut through better.
The volume of the vocals is fine. Finally smile

For a quick one, your song is actually quite mature.
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