Hi Rob, Marty, Andrew and Mario,
Thanks that you were all so kind on the song. Of course it is because you all want to know these secrets, but I'm sorry. Can't do that, they blow your mind and I don't want this to happen to you, because I don't wish this on you, because you are all too dear to me for that.

Originally Posted by TuneMonger
Hans, right away this made me think of a Bob Dylan song, "It's Alright, Ma (I'm Only Bleeding) The line that reminded me of your song was "If my thought dreams could be seen, they'd probably put me in a guillotine." Your song very much had your signature style to it and I enjoyed it a lot. Good job!

Hi Rob, I have my doubts on the song if this line you quoted, was the one that made you think of Bob Dylan, a guillotine...
But I do like that you enjoyed the song!

Originally Posted by BabuMusic
Ah, come on, Hans. You're among friends here. You can tell us. Well, at least I can tell you that this is an excellent song. Well written and mixed. I use the resonator often, and you gave it a new stage with this one. There is something from 2:29 to 2:48 ( or thereabots) that rubs my ears the wrong way. I suspect the loops, but it's probably my ears. Such a good write and I really like the vocals.

Well Marty, you're always fishing for secrets ;-) As for what was bothering your ears, I think you were right. I let that resonator play a bit longer than I intended, but forgot to stop it. I fixed that. So, it weren't your ears this time.

Originally Posted by Andrew Dee
Hi Hans! This is a good song about secrets while keeping them … secret. I love the style you’ve used for the song - it keeps the beat going and emphasises the lighthearted treatment of the topic. I’m not usually a fan of a resonator, but in your hands, it worked well to create a quirky, fun solo. Like Marty said, the back end of the solo became confusing for me, and on my headphones, I lost the beat.
Overall, a good melodic and fun song that was a pleasure to listen to. Well done.
Andrew

Hi Andrew, I'm also not a fan of a resonator, but like the citar I have to use it at least one time. And as I said to Marty I solved your confusion. At least, I think I did.

Originally Posted by MarioD
Hi Hans, I would really like to write a review for this great song but I can't, its a secret wink
Seriously this is a very clever song. Your voice is spot on and the lyrics are top shelf. A super resonator lead also. Super mix
I really liked it.

Hi Mario, you weren't confused about the resonator. I'm glad about that. I fixed it anyway, for the others here. I'm glad you enjoyed this song and weren't curious about what secrets might be lurking in my head. Thanks for that!

Have a nice weekend!
Hans


Hans Berkhout
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