Superb. The message is the crux of this track, however the musical writing is inspired, also. Biting, sharp, communicative, and pulling no punches. Excellent use of harmony and of repetitive rhythm. Coming back to the lyrics, however: for some reason, they remind me of the lyrics to "Praying For Time", by George Michael. Yes, a completely different style; but the message is in the same vein, for me, although differently nuanced, perhaps (yours is perhaps more biting than Michael's). Particularly loved the last stanza, but all of it (including the ingenious rhymes) is inspired. Well done, Ray ... it takes a brilliant musician and not a negligible amount of courage (or despair, who knows) to produce something like this. Sadly or otherwise, loved it.

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