Hi David,

I read your long version about how you created this beautiful song.
It's a miracle you even finished it after all that consideration and advice!
I think it's a sweet, straightforward song, with great vocals!
As Alan already wrote, it's from the 70s, and all the girls used to sing along, because they always knew the lyrics by heart.
There's one thing I would have done differently: the strings. They could use a bit more volume.
They are so nice in this type of song.

Hans


Hans Berkhout
(Birchwood)
https://soundcloud.com/user-296497130