Originally Posted by Andrew Dee
Hi Marty!
I like the chord movements in this one - and appreciate the secondary dominant progression at the end of the verses: C# > F# > B (>E). Thank you your chord layout at the end of your threads - it’s always very helpful to see what is happening.

Is this about food or something else? Or both? Excuse my naivety - or reading too much in to it - I can sometimes be poor at picking up signals.

Andrew
PS the sax solo is great; those outro switches are a nice touch; and also the verse notes ‘wait/late’ etc. are the Lennon power notes.
Thank you, Andrew. Well, let's see. We humans, as a species, have one natural imperative, and eating is second only because the first requires energy. We also have a spiritual imperative, and this song has little to do with that, I suppose. Man, I'm definitely with you on the inability to pick up signals, which is not necessarily a bad thing. smile

Originally Posted by Tano Music
Loved it all! Great, creative work! Kudos as expressed by the others. Did I hear that you were an English teacher? You have an extraordinary attention for words/syllables/dual meanings/rhymes--so masterful, and way beyond the norm for lyric-writing. Excellent Marty!
Thanks, Tom! OH, NO, definitely not an English teacher. Barely finished 12 years of school and squeeked by with a C+ average. But since school, I've studied just about everything. Thank you again for your kind words. Funny, too, beause I think those things listening to your lyrics.


Enjoy whatever happens!
marty

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