Beautiful in so many ways, David. This is so well produced and mixed. Cool melody and lyics. Memories --especially the happy ones-- can bring us sadness. So far I listened 3 times and not once did I say, "Hey. where's that knock-me-down chorus." Your song is all about strong feelings. The hook for me is the last couplet:
my world is small and sad
because that i'm the only one

It brought me back for more. I'm with ya, man.


Enjoy whatever happens!
marty

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