This is great imagery:
“the days grow short
   and i am helpless as a rabbit on the run
   my world is small and sad
   i'm the lonely one”

The new synth vocals have an excellent blend.

The sound reminds Janice of the band Bread especially.
And also of some other soft rock bands she listened to in the 70’s.

We love the back story!
It’s hard to imagine putting that much effort into a production.
Bud always says “mixing is never finished … just abandoned.”
He also said you might be the exception to that. smile

But the bottom line is it sounds great on the monitors.
And one look at the waveform before hitting play told us what we would hear.
An open mix with great dynamics setting up a fine soundstage.
And it was.

Your contemplation and DAW effort assuredly paid off big time Enjoyed it!

J&B

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