Hi Mario, Andrew, Chay and Bob,
Thanks for your comments on this song.

Originally Posted by MarioD
Hans, what an outstanding song. Loved the arrangement and production. Your vocal was very strong and the lyrics were great. Super backing band and mix.
Loved it

Hi Mario, you are always so positive. I really enjoyed your comment!

Originally Posted by Andrew Dee
Hi Hans!
That chorus is very catchy and, like the theme of the song, I’m glad that it repeats. Some of your lyric imagery is intriguing and several lines could be a verse in themselves - but less is more and you leave the listener wanting more. The only arrangement or mix comment I’d give is that the guitar is sometimes competing in the same space as the vocal, so maybe put it more to one side and bring it back to centre for the solo. I’ll listen again later today through my monitors rather than my airbuds.
Great song!
Edit: I listened again and the mix was not so much an issue with the guitars, so maybe it was more to do with my familiarity of your song. Love the song even more the second time ‘round!
Andrew

Hi Andrew; I listened to you and panned my guitars some more to the sides, because I think you were right. After I did so, still some mention the same issue as you did, but then I already altered that panning... Hoping you would listen again, as you did. And I was glad it was no issue for you anymore. Thanks a lot for this and your other nice comment!

Originally Posted by WaoBand
There's some great instrumentation and original arrangement in this song. It sounds like it's made for a forum user collaboration: Janice on vocals, Dave Bell lead guitar and Marty on bass.

Hi Chat, I had to laugh at the collaboration you suggested; it's a friendly way of telling me I should just leave this song. At least, that's what came to mind (jokingly). And don't tell me it wasn't meant as a joke...

Originally Posted by rsdean
Hans,
Great song with a hard-hitting vocal. You and your music are in fine form these days.
Loved it!
Bob

Hi Bob, thanks for this, but you and Joliz are doing very well too!

Have a nice day,
Hans

Hans Berkhout
(Birchwood)
https://soundcloud.com/user-296497130