Hi, asome2me.

This is a pleasant song to listen to.

There are some things I'd do to make it sound better. I apologize if some of this don't translate well.

The main problem is the reverb. It makes the song sound like you recorded this in a big, empty room. While it's good to have reverb, it needs to be the right type, and the right amount. To me, it sounds like there is a bit too much reverb, moving everything too far away.

That's true with both versions. Since I have no I idea what the English vocals as when the SynthV voice sings it, I prefer the version with your voice. smile

There are also some places where the music seems to be clashing with the vocal, like at 0:30, 0:34, 0:50, 1:50 and 2:08 in the SynthV version.

Thanks for posting!


-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?