Asom2me, I agree with everything David said about your original version. I did not listen to the synth V version.

This is a good song that with a little polishing would become a great song.
Keep up the good work.


The bumper sticker said "I'm a veterinarian, therefore I can drive like an animal".
Suddenly I realized how many proctologists are on the road.

64 bit Win 10 Pro, the latest BiaB/RB, Roland Octa-Capture audio interface, a ton of software/hardware