Asom2me, I agree with everything David said about your original version. I did not listen to the synth V version.

This is a good song that with a little polishing would become a great song.
Keep up the good work.


Why is it that doctors call what they do 'practice'?
If flying is so safe, why do they call the airport, the terminal?

64 bit Win 10 Pro, the latest BiaB/RB, Roland Octa-Capture audio interface, a ton of software/hardware