Hi Beth!
Listened 3 times now, but only to your latest version. Your BVs behind your main vocal are great - two thoughts came to mind - they conjured angels (or others) singing with you, or illustrating your voice over time and space coming back in multiples ways. The fiddle and piano providing the rhythm backing kept the song moving forward and were a good combination.

I found it hard in the last verse to hear what the male and your voice were saying … then it was over. To continue your own humour, I thought ‘Eternity’ was short. laugh One idea could be to lengthen and give each voice their own space?

Very good song - and good to have you back adding your thought-provoking and melodic songs to the forum after a short hiatus!

Andrew