Originally Posted by DC Ron
Andrew, really nicely arranged and performed tune. Nice hook on the chorus. Like your vocals + vox FX on this one. The middle eight is especially nice. Super playing, too! Sorry to say none of your apologies were warranted to ensure my enjoyment of this song. Sounds great to me, which isn't easy for slow-ish minor key tunes.

About that sitar sound on the G string...

That's usually a nut slot cut too deep. To check: Fret the G string on the second fret and tap down on the G string at the first fret. If you don't hear a "ting" as the string strikes the first fret, the nut slot is cut too deep. Lots of YouTube videos on fixes for this, the easiest being baking soda and crazy glue. Feel free to DM if questions, this is my (other) hobby...
Thanks Ron! Glad you liked the song. I've edited my original post after respondents have said nothing to apologise for. To leave it there would have appeared 'needy'. eek

Thanks for your response regarding the G-string. I have sent you a PM with details - it appears it might be the bridge saddle.

Andrew