Fred, I really enjoyed this. I esp liked the economic melody line, and how you respected it with your lyric. And some great choices there, esp "Finally found a foothold/Might be rock could be clay"--that's really excellent wordsmithing! I'd love to hear the "original" backing--to my ears, the lyric seems more intimate than the "new" backing sound level--but I understand how you were tailoring this for a broader project. Excellent work, and let's hear more!


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