Golden Gate Glide

Hello, so my daughter came to visit for a day and a half, after we took care of some business, we decided to do our first co-lab. Not having very much time we decided to write about our daytrip to the city. We sketched some lyrics together and asked my virtual band to sing and play it. I think it is a great way to have a father and daughter night of fun. BTW!, it is in F# minor if you want to play along. What do you think?
Donny G.