Nice one Andrew.
I liked it all except the tone of the rising guitar line...I think I would rather it be cleaner or truly fuzzed out.
Bass could be a little louder perhaps so that the change of direction was more evident.
You wrote a very interesting lyric that has plenty of scope for interpretation.
ACE!


Cheers
rayc
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