Originally Posted by rayc
… I liked it all except the tone of the rising guitar line...I think I would rather it be cleaner or truly fuzzed out.
Bass could be a little louder perhaps so that the change of direction was more evident.
You wrote a very interesting lyric that has plenty of scope for interpretation.
ACE!
Thanks Ray! It’s always good to get feedback from others to understand what others are hearing, or not, and consider this for the next song. I’m finding the production process one of skill accumulation.
Thanks for listening!
Andrew