Hi, Andrew.

Nice write.

I'll echo B.D. The verses are fine, but the chorus really nails that Beatles vibe, and the shift to A major works really well.

Loved the backstory, and it was cool to listen to the prior versions.

Your process isn't that different than mine, in that lyrics usually come last. Since vocals don't drive the write, it can make it easier to do a rewrite.

Very cool! smile


-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?