Originally Posted by dcuny
Nice write.

I'll echo B.D. The verses are fine, but the chorus really nails that Beatles vibe, and the shift to A major works really well.

Loved the backstory, and it was cool to listen to the prior versions.

Your process isn't that different than mine, in that lyrics usually come last. Since vocals don't drive the write, it can make it easier to do a rewrite.

Very cool! smile
Thanks David!
Heading to this chorus was always uplifting for me as I worked on the song. Your own summaries have demonstrated there is an appetite amongst forum members to hear about the songwriting and recording journey. Your comment about lyrics made me think that I have a modular view of songs - I can pull out the old lyrics module and transplant the new. I’m hoping the new lungs on this one are better.
Thanks for listening to its development!
Andrew