Hi, James.

Pleasant sound! It's got your signature harmonies, too. laugh

I find it strange for the piano to play that long with only single notes, but perhaps that's just me. It fits, but my ear wants thirds and sixths. smile

There's space between the phrases for an answering counter-line, especially the second time around. You do a touch of it at 4:42, but it might have been nice to have used contrasting instruments earlier, like an oboe and cello. MuseScore has some lovely free instruments.

Of course, that would probably detract from the simple feel that you're going for here, which works very well.


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Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?