Originally Posted by rsdean
Marty,

Dark and brooding. Bluesy and thoughtful...

You are making some really terrific music. I love the song, your vocal and Dave's awesome guitar.

A new favorite for me!

Bob
Thanks so much, Bob. Thanks for a nod to the vocal and, man, you're right, Dave killed this one by bringing so much life to it.

Originally Posted by Brno
Again, even tho I like your song, your vocal sounds bothers me. Flangerish and buried. I would like to hear your own voice. Otherwise well produced and good guitar solos.
Thanks, Arri. But I didn't use the Nectar Dimension setting on this one, so now we can figure it's just my voice you don't like. Man, I get that. Thanks again for the listen, and I'm actually glad to hear your comments. They mean a lot and are very helpful.

Originally Posted by DC Ron
Marty, neat song and a stellar production that casts an ethereal, dark shadow. The Band (in a Box) sounds great, especially that strummed acoustic, but you and Dave are (rightfully) the stars. Really nice arrangement (cool stop!) and the mix is just right. I'd back off on the vocal FX/edits just a hair myself to let your very appealing natural dynamics shine a bit more, but that's my personal preference. Nice one!
Thanks, Ron. The echo FX really only comes in the beginning and ending, like me sitting deep in the forest, coming out to sing about the experience, then going back in the end. Right? What Dave does in this one is beyond perfect.

Originally Posted by WaoBand
Incredible lyrics here, Marty. I 100% relate. I love the production and the effect on the vocals, plus of course Dave's guitar. This is my favourite of your to date.
There's no 'music' like that of Great Nature's nature-al sounds, and I'm often baffled as to why joggers I sometimes see on the beach wear headphones to listen to something else! laugh
I've copied the YT link and the lyrics so that I can post them for friends on other sites who I know will love the music and lyrics.
Thanks so much, Chay. Yeah, headphones are okay for cutting grass, but not for drowning out nature. You get it alright. Thanks also for spreading the word.


Enjoy whatever happens!
marty

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