Originally Posted by BlueAttitude
I actually love the effects on your vocal, I think they really match the mood of the music. There is a time and a place for dry vocals, or vocals with minimal FX, but man, this ain't one of them wink

I think the song is absolutely brilliant in every way, the production is fabulous, and I'm very happy to be a part of it.
Thanks, Dave. You are a big chunk of those accolades. Man, I never suggest anything for your parts because you always blow me away with something better than I ever imagined. In this one the fact that you added so much into what I figured would be an empty entrance leading up to a romp in the woods, you brought the Intro to new life. Man, I could talk about your contribution to the extent that folks would know the song sucked without it.

Originally Posted by Knee Wobbler
That is soooooooo good Marty,

Everything from the Vox, Dave’s lead guitar, rhythm guitar, the rasp, the finger clicking, lyrics is, excellent. The lyrics really painted so much imagery and your vocal really emphasised that imagery, a well placed pause after “the chaos ceased”. This has to be the best song of yours I’ve heard thus far.

Super tune buddy,
Oh, man, thank you so much, Lee. You even heard the finger clicking. The drum notes on the side of the floor toms just before them was subtle fun representing the insects. Haha. So glad you like it, man.

Originally Posted by Tano Music
What a great place to meditate on life! I've done it lots of times. As always, I really like your lyrics/rhyming--nice and tight. I liked the effects, esp at the end--kind of gave it a "nature's cathedral" feel. Musically, I enjoyed it a lot. It's interesting that the style is "campfire", but you turned it into something more than strumming and making smores. Great work, enjoyed it!
Thank you, Tom. Yes! You get it, a nature's cathedral feel. Good one. Right? I thought the same thing, Campfire to that. Dave gets the credit for keeping the fire contained while simultaneously scorching the earth.

Originally Posted by dcuny
Hi, Marty.

The loping feel of the song has an easy-going sort of western feel to it, which fits.

The vocal effects work well, as does Dave's guitar.

Nice work.

The tremolo of the electric piano is for mystery, and the organ is for piety.

Ah, so that's what it means. laugh
Thanks, David. Haha. Now you're making fun of me with my wimpy explanation of the piano and organ. Love it, man. Actually laughed out loud. Yes, now I hear a western feel in there, like an easy ride on a horse walking slow, a long piece of straw dangling from my mouth while I strum an old acoustic guitar.

Enjoy whatever happens!
marty

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